just coz i should give a critique... I personally think it should of been his head... but that is my humour, but the "oh! nice one, frank!" just priceless and even including the record button is a charm. I think the dinosaur running away needed a bit of a "AHHHHhhhhh!!!" to emphasize the hurt feeling of having the tail snapped off. Over all fantastic work and of coarse a major laugh will always be there at every comic strip. Colour use is in a classic comic newspaper strip appearance, so it will follow the legends of Garfield and Hagar the Horrible.
I personally think it should of been his head... but that is my humour, but the "oh! nice one, frank!" just priceless and even including the record button is a charm.
I think the dinosaur running away needed a bit of a "AHHHHhhhhh!!!" to emphasize the hurt feeling of having the tail snapped off.
Over all fantastic work and of coarse a major laugh will always be there at every comic strip.
Colour use is in a classic comic newspaper strip appearance, so it will follow the legends of Garfield and Hagar the Horrible.
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